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If I don't get this out in the open I will EXPLODE.
I sent Vame Haven's synopsis, prologue, and first 5 chapters to a literary agent! ! !
I'm scared to death. I do not know what I fear more, a rejection notice, or nothing at all. If he doesn't respond, then I am spared his cruel words, but if he responds then it was worth his time to write the cruel words.
Oh dear.
Here I post for everyone the prologue and synopsis. Tell me what you think loves?
I shall update the rest of the world about my life tomorrow hopefully. If I haven't died of heartfailure before then.
Naamarie -Starshine-
Synopsis
"Crys is a Vamean. This startling revelation is brought to her by her
best friend out of the blue, in the dead of the night. She is a
half-breed, half human and half vampire, which makes her a potential
threat to the vampire's greatest nemeses, the Restok. After so many
years living in bliss ignorance of her true identity, Crys is abruptly
thrust into an entire new world unknown to her. After a malicious
attack from the Restok that leaves her family less, Crys' only anchor
is her best friend, Drake, who is a vampire, and her self-appointed
protector. After a narrow escape from the Restok, Crys is
confronted with what it means to be a Vamean warrior, and that she is
more than just a Vamean, but one of several Vameans prophesied by "The
Vamean", Rahme Tresmont, thousands of years ago. Denying her identity
as a Vamean will lead to her inevitable death at the hands of the
Restok, yet accepting it promises a lonely and dangerous life as a
warrior leader of the underworld.
As the rest of the prophesied Vameans are found, Crys is joined by the
fun-loving and vivacious Jake, prankster Ryan, serious and diplomatic
Roscoe, happy-go-lucky Hannah, and the quiet, withdrawn Rebekah. As
these Vameans, guided by the underworld's head senator, Damon, start
down their destined path, they must eventually realize that their fate
is leading them to something much greater and more horrific than anyone
had anticipated. Suddenly, they are left to fend for themselves, as the
Restok's intricate web of lies and evil infiltrates the underworld, and
they alone have the power to put a stop to it; if only they could find
the key.
It is now that they must rely on each other and strengthen their bond
if they want to survive, but instead they seem to be distancing
themselves. Distrust grows as accusations and lies spread amongst them.
Are they ever going to get out of it? Can Jake and Crys find a way to
pull the group back together, without Drake and Damon to help them?
What is the secret behind the Restok? Can they prevent the impending
doom for vampires and humans alike? Only Rahme can say... "
Vame Haven
In the year 2978, North and South
Korea became one; both halves were under communist rule. In 3625 China, Japan,
Taiwan, and Korea built an alliance with Russia, known as the Rujakotach
Alliance, to take over the world. The United States, Canada, United Kingdom,
and Australia built an alliance, called the United C.A.S.K., to resist the
Rujakotach. The rest of Europe refused to ally with either side, building their
own alliance—the European Old Guard. A third world war broke out as the United C.A.S.K.
fought to keep their territory, the Rujakoch Alliance fought to take over the
territory, and the European Old Guard fought to keep their territory as well as
take over any territory they could.
Then, complications arose in the
European Old Guard, as France and Germany argued bitterly over where the EOG
headquarters should be located. Finally, Germany turned on France and conspired
against them, turning all other countries in the EOG against them, and wiping
France’s population out. Germany became headquarters for the EOG and became
determined to rise in power and recognition. The world would fear them. Their
fight for survival turned into a fight for domination.
The war lasted for 75 miserable
years. As the years went by, the difference between United States, Australia,
Canada, and the United Kingdom slowly dispersed; the four countries were
referred to as one: The United C.A.S.K. They became one government and one
country officially in 3668.
As the United Cask alliance flourished, the other alliances began to
falter and fail. Japan turned against Russia, Korea snubbed China, Italy spited
Spain, and Hungary raged against Czech. The only alliance that held together
was the United Cask. The true reason was never discovered; the presumption held
by the public was that they were the only alliance fighting with valor. While
valor and honor were part of the reason, they were not the main reason.
With wit, intelligence, and determination, they managed to arrange treaties
and contracts with Japan and Korea. If they surrendered to the United Cask,
their original territory would be restored, under United Cask government, with
full pardon. In return, they had to help put an end to the rest of the
rebelling countries. Taiwan, China, and Russia refused the contract, joining
the EOG alliance instead. As country after country in Europe was utterly
destroyed, however, Taiwan and China followed Japan and Korea’s example.
Russia, Italy, Spain, and Greece fell one after the other as the United
Cask wiped their civilization out with bomb after bomb. It wasn’t until half of
Germany lay in ruins, however, that what was left of the EOG surrendered.
The United Cask rebuilt and modernized the destroyed countries as well
as Japan and Korea. The greater part of Germany was rebuilt, but parts of it
remained as they were before the war. No explanation was asked and none was
ever offered. It simply remained a mystery.
By the time the year 8000 arrived, the greater part of the world enjoyed
peace and modern convenience under the United C.A.S.K. government. All parts of
the country were lost in the hubbub of happy lives, well-paying jobs, and easy
travel. Only small parts of Germany, with their villages and houses of the 31st
century were isolated. Though they lay merely 200 kilometers from the large
cities—and with modern transportation, these trips took no more than 10
minutes—they were a world of their own. And, as is usually the case with little
worlds like this one, strange, and sometimes even supernatural things can
happen… things that could change the world… things that the world never
discovers…
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